bart haiku

Submitted by boopiejones on Wed, 10/29/2008 - 4:43pm

Car full of females
Blondes brunettes and red heads too
To stand, I am doomed

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the doors are closing but the

Submitted by There is no mic... on Wed, 10/29/2008 - 7:26pm.

the doors are closing
but the bike is in the way
people squeeze in more

Haiku Forum Bart Rage

Submitted by Evil Pete on Thu, 10/30/2008 - 11:57am.

Haiku Forum Bart Rage lacks
Unique New vent for Rage should exist
A Forum one should create

rush hour plus A's

Submitted by adipasqu on Wed, 10/29/2008 - 7:50pm.

rush hour plus A's game
Fremont train in six minutes
why only three cars?

"Five car Richmond train Now

Submitted by senork on Wed, 10/29/2008 - 10:34pm.

"Five car Richmond train
Now approaching platform one"
Late to 12th, again.

Car full of hot guys Tall,

Submitted by Hockey on Thu, 10/30/2008 - 10:13am.

Car full of hot guys
Tall, scruffy with muscles too
Sigh, please look at me...

Mr. Happy? -Chrystal

Submitted by chrystalflanders on Thu, 10/30/2008 - 10:42am.

Mr. Happy?

-Chrystal Flanders
http://www.damnyouchrystal.com

Chrystal Flanders fails form

Submitted by Evil Pete on Thu, 10/30/2008 - 11:48am.

Chrystal Flanders fails form Haiku
as post must be in Haiku form
now must try post again

Evil Pete's Haiku Funny

Submitted by Hockey on Thu, 10/30/2008 - 3:37pm.

Evil Pete's Haiku
Funny because, he fails too
Your Haiku, so blew.

The Evil Pete Man May

Submitted by TreoBART on Thu, 10/30/2008 - 3:35pm.

The Evil Pete Man
May Misunderstand Haiku
Syllables, not words

Pittsburg Baypoint

Submitted by TreoBART on Thu, 10/30/2008 - 3:33pm.

Pittsburg Baypoint Line
Gliding gently on the tracks
Fear the last station

Standing room only Why does

Submitted by adipasqu on Thu, 10/30/2008 - 7:21pm.

Standing room only
Why does it not surprise me?
pushy people suck!

Berkeley Station Close to UC

Submitted by calbarter on Thu, 10/30/2008 - 8:43pm.

Berkeley Station
Close to UC and Smelly
Oh the Richmond Line!

Love EZ Rider I hate dirty

Submitted by btmapper on Thu, 10/30/2008 - 8:51pm.

Love EZ Rider
I hate dirty feet on seats
Happy Halloween

To Powers That Be A new Fourm

Submitted by Evil Pete on Fri, 10/31/2008 - 12:09pm.

To Powers That Be
A new Fourm Please create
Where a post must haiku

giant silver train screams

Submitted by stoconnell on Fri, 10/31/2008 - 12:49pm.

giant silver train
screams like a wild banshee
must be super fast

What car smells like

Submitted by boopiejones on Fri, 10/31/2008 - 9:14pm.

What car smells like butt?
Seventeen thirtyeight x.
Please help, concord shop!

'gomery at rush hour Pitt

Submitted by boopiejones on Wed, 11/12/2008 - 5:18pm.

'gomery at rush hour
Pitt train in fifteen minutes
Bart scheduling sucks

More Riders BART Want Packed

Submitted by Evil Pete on Wed, 11/12/2008 - 5:27pm.

More Riders BART Want
Packed Train People Now Ride
A Balance Need Be

evil pete's haiku read them

Submitted by boopiejones on Wed, 11/12/2008 - 7:04pm.

evil pete's haiku
read them with a yoda voice
you'll laugh your ass off

Sir boopiejones get the joke,

Submitted by Evil Pete on Sat, 11/15/2008 - 8:50am.

Sir boopiejones
get the joke, You are first to
laugh very much you may

Dublin Pleasanton Seven train

Submitted by TreoBART on Wed, 11/12/2008 - 5:52pm.

Dublin Pleasanton
Seven train cars board middle
People do not read

Lake Merritt Station Disabled

Submitted by white06lacrossecxs on Mon, 11/17/2008 - 1:39pm.

Lake Merritt Station
Disabled train ahead
Another ten minute delay

packed like sardines next

Submitted by Evil Pete on Mon, 11/17/2008 - 12:02pm.

packed like sardines
next train late and packed the same
should have took the bus

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